This is a guest post by Kendall McKenna
My first novel, Brothers In Arms, was released by Silver Publishing on April 7, 2012. This was not the first manuscript I submitted, nor was Silver the first (or only) publisher I made this particular submission to. Getting my first novel published was the culmination of two years of hard work and persistence. While this experience is unique to me, there are elements of it that I hope will be of help to some of you hoping to have a manuscript published.
I feel very fortunate to have witnessed the age of the e-reader and independent publishing. I voraciously read m/m erotic novels. I loved their graphic nature. I loved that I could shop at home for new books. I loved their reasonable price points. I did not always love the quality of the writing or the editing that I often encountered.
So, I began to write. In the beginning, I strove to write better erotic scenes than some of the ones I was reading. Later, I worked on writing likable and believable characters. Eventually, I learned how to formulate a plot, and how to write action sequences. I learned how to write a solid, complex story when previously, I’d been writing a series of individual scenes or vignettes.
Don’t, for a moment, think that I did this in a vacuum.
Writers call them
alpha readers, beta readers, or crit-partners. I call them friends. Whatever title you prefer, they should all have one invaluable trait: they tell you what you need to hear, not what you want to hear. One of the smartest things I’ve ever done as a writer, was surround myself with readers who will tell me when something is wrong with spelling, punctuation, word use, grammar, characters, plot, dialog or pacing. I ask two things of them; that they cut me no slack and demand the highest quality of writing from me. Striving for their approval has made me a better writer.
When I finally believed I was good enough to have a manuscript accepted for publication, I had decisions to make. What story should I write? How long should it be? What genre? Which press should I submit to?
I began by identifying the indie presses I wanted to submit manuscripts to. I started with my own collection of e-books, listing the presses whose products I had purchased. Next, I listed the indie publishers providing content to Amazon.com. I networked with published authors and listed their presses. I conducted an internet search on e-book publishers.
Once I had my list, I whittled it down by eliminating presses with bad reputations. I did this through my network of authors, as well as the forum on absolutewrite.com. I ended up with a list of around ten indie e-presses I believed I could accept a contract from, should they make an offer.
Now I just needed to write something that I could submit!
Indie presses all have submission pages that explain what types of manuscripts they are looking for, as well as the requirements for submitting your manuscript to them. Most also have ‘special calls’ or ‘special submissions’. These are calls for manuscripts of a specific theme, topic or genre. They are sometimes for individual novellas, all to be published with the same cover art. Others are for anthologies.
I believed that submitting a 5,000 word story for an anthology would increase my chances of an offer.
My first mistake was not having a critique partner read my story before submitting. My second mistake was in thinking it would be easier to be accepted for the first time for an anthology. That first manuscript was rejected. It was a polite rejection, but a rejection nonetheless.
My second submission was also for an anthology. This story was better written than the first one had been. Still, this manuscript was rejected.
At that point, I was feeling discouraged. However, I was fortunate to have a network of experienced authors who shared their knowledge with me. These special submission calls are edited by an individual who is searching for stories with very specific criteria. It is often difficult to determine just what types of stories the editor is looking for. A manuscript that could be accepted for a general submission call, might be rejected for a special call, because it doesn’t quite fit the editor’s vision for the anthology.
I gave up on the idea of submitting for special calls and decided to submit a stand-alone novella. It sounds simple, but publishers receive a lot of submissions. Since I had no reputation to fall back on, I knew I had to make my manuscript stand out from all the others.
When asked, e-press representatives always say they are searching for something new, something different and fresh. Yes, vampires are popular right now. So are zombies and shape-shifters. If there is a glut of these types of published stories, you can imagine how many more are rejected.
If every feature of your story can be found in a previously published story, you need to make some changes.
I decided to take a risk that apparently paid off. Brothers In Arms is more suspense/thriller than erotica. The romance is the B-plot. My characters are US Marines and the story is filled with military jargon. There are few, if any, independently published stories like it.
I submitted my manuscript to five presses simultaneously. The first response I received was a rejection from a high-profile press I would very much like to be published with. When I requested feedback, I was pleased to learn it had not been a question of quality, but that my story was more plot than romance and had a heat-factor on the lower end of the scale. I was encouraged.
The second response I received was an offer from Silver Publishing. I was overjoyed. I texted my husband and emailed my friends. The offer alone was a victory. At that moment, it was enough to have been accepted.
When I settled down, I realized I had a decision to make. I had yet to receive responses from three other presses. One of these was another high-profile one on my ‘wish list’. However, I was an unpublished author with absolutely no following. I didn’t believe I had the luxury of asking Silver to wait for an answer while I held out for a better offer. The reality was, I would not have submitted my manuscript to Silver if I had not been perfectly willing to do business with them. While not as high-profile as some other presses, they pay a generous commission, provide all the necessary pre-press services, and have a solid reputation for treating their authors well.
I accepted Silver’s offer. Over the next several days, I signed contracts electronically and completed the first round of technical edits to my manuscript. I knew I needed to withdraw my manuscript from the remaining three presses so as not to waste their time. Unfortunately, or not, I was caught up in the excitement of signing with Silver and delayed making notifications for a few days. During that time, I received a second offer.
I admit, it was huge boost to my ego. Not just one, but two presses deemed my manuscript worthy of publication. I was proud and honored. I notified the second press that the manuscript was no longer available, to which they responded with a request to be given a chance at any future manuscripts I might produce. I was delighted to agree.
The hard part might have been over, but the work was not. There were months of editing and artwork approval that lead up to the release of Brothers In Arms. I would be lying if I said I didn’t enjoy every moment. However, that is the topic of another blog!
I hope that my story has been both useful and encouraging to some or all of you. Hard work, constructive criticism, patience, persistence and tenacity are all key to getting your manuscript published. Be ready for rejection because you’ll receive it, but it doesn’t mean you’ll never become a published author. Have faith in yourself and keep trying.
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Kendall McKenna’s first work of fiction was written at the worldly age of nine, and was a transformative work that expanded on the story told in a popular song of the time. She tried her hand at vampire and cowboy fiction, winning high school poetry and short story contests along the way. It wasn’t until she discovered the world of m/m erotic fiction and found her stride with cops, Marines and muscle cars, that she felt inspired to share her stories with readers who enjoy the same things. Kendall was born and raised in Southern California, where she still lives and works. A non-conventional relationship has kept her happy for the last decade. Her four dogs enjoy it when she writes, as she sits still long enough for them to curl up around her.
You can buy her new book Brothers in Arms from Silver Publishing or at Amazon.com
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